“ The big vocabulary; the clever repartee; the witticisms and word play; the obscure, in-crowd cultural references; the ability to perform textual gymnastics…all of this destroys the work.”
Does it? Not everyone writes in the Ernest Hemingway/Raymond Carver stripped-down school.
The idea that there is one standard of writing and not following that standard means you’ve destroyed the work is as lethal a killer to the flow of creativity as I can imagine.
I’m not saying the Let ‘er Rip school is the only one, either. But I’ve never thought Faulkner’s “Kill your darlings”* means “Cut out anything that isn’t bare-bones minimalism.” I might be wrong.
Good article.
*I’ve never understood why so many think this is the greatest piece of writing advice, ever, either.